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Monday, June 29, 2020

Literacy

2 comments:

  1. Hi Azania I’m shocked! I never would have guessed you’d be sarcastic. Especially when you’ve written such great poetry. Lol.
    I loved your couplet, its wise and made me laugh, oh to have a cats life...if something goes wrong it can be fixed with a treat. Your quatrain also made me laugh - it’s light and fun. I also liked your diamante poem and your concrete poem which reminded me of some Dr Seuss wisdom.
    In fact I like all of your poems and I thought they were a nice mix of dark and light feeling. This shows how versatile you are becoming as a writer.
    No more sarcasm ok. You should be proud of your work!

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  2. Hi Azania. I really liked the way you did a sarcastic yay.
    I liked all of your poems but my favorite was your couplet I liked the rhyming and how the cat went in for the treat.

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