I was a pupil at Rāwhiti School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Monday, June 29, 2020
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Hi Azania I’m shocked! I never would have guessed you’d be sarcastic. Especially when you’ve written such great poetry. Lol.
ReplyDeleteI loved your couplet, its wise and made me laugh, oh to have a cats life...if something goes wrong it can be fixed with a treat. Your quatrain also made me laugh - it’s light and fun. I also liked your diamante poem and your concrete poem which reminded me of some Dr Seuss wisdom.
In fact I like all of your poems and I thought they were a nice mix of dark and light feeling. This shows how versatile you are becoming as a writer.
No more sarcasm ok. You should be proud of your work!
Hi Azania. I really liked the way you did a sarcastic yay.
ReplyDeleteI liked all of your poems but my favorite was your couplet I liked the rhyming and how the cat went in for the treat.