Monday, July 20, 2020
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holy that monkey looks amazing i not shore want to change it perfect nice job love it thre monkey though.:-)
ReplyDeleteHi Rylin,
DeleteI also like this monkey I think it is cute
Next time you could use capital letters at
the start of sentences for comments
Thanks.
Hey Azania.
ReplyDeleteI like the animal that you chose and how simple and easy it was to pick on these facts. The picture that you chose really made this piece of writing more exiting and fun.
Next time you should add some labels.
from Kiwa.
Thanks for the comment Kiwa
DeleteI will use some labels next time.
Haii Azania,
ReplyDeleteThe Golden snub-nosed monkey is super cute and I love the the layout for some reason.
Its interesting that they are herbivores, as I thought all monkeys eat some insects as well as fruit and vege.
Maybe next time you could give more description instead of saying they excrete like humans etc.
Lily
Hi Azania I like how you have chosen such a unique animal to write about and I really like how you have presented your work. I love how easy it is to read and I love the pictures.
ReplyDeleteHi azania i think you have done such a
ReplyDeletegood job i dont know what to change i love how you chose monkeys thats a great thing to do.
Hi Azania,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your MRSGREN,
And the Golden Snub Nosed Monkey looks so cute!
Maybe next time you could change up the font or change the background to make it look more appealing.
other than that great job! :)